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Monday, June 26, 2006

The Norvia Chronicles - Chapter 4

Ups... Looks like it's my turn to write something in this story...
Just as a curiosity to the blog's readers, I was the only one who did not write this and other stories by MSN some time before the blog was created, and so I didn't know what to write here. Fortunatelly, Fipa told me the story they've invented was all writen in this blog, already, and so I could invent something new now.
And so I will! Just hope you like it (also hope you've never heard anything about Oblivion and it's story :P). I want comments from all our readers (why do many of you just read and don't post any feedback?) and even from our writers, because this is a stroy we are all writing in turns.

The Norvia Chronicles
Chapter 4

Frederious's heart skipped a beat when he realized the mysterious person was heading to his room. Who was it? Whas he or she going to help them? Or simply had different plans for the group?
Then, he realized that person was not alone. Two other human shapes were now visible in the middle of the darkness. Who were them?
The three shapes were now in front of the iron door. He realized, with surprise, that the two shapes that appeared after were soldiers. The other one seemed to be just a normal person...
'Are you sure it is in this cell?' asked one of them to the mysterious person, receiving a simple nod in reply.
'Stand back!' he shouted to Frederious, Sarith and Anya. 'Go to the opposite wall of the door and wait there facing the window on it with your arms up!'
Frederious hesitated, then accepted his disadvantadge and did what the guard sayd. Sarith and Anya moved to the wall, too, but more slownly, due to their wounds.
Facing the little window in the wall he was standing, Frederious heard a click and then the door open. He heard the footsteps of the three people, and then the door closing again.
'Don't ever try to get out of that position' say one of the guards. 'We won't hesitate to kill you if you don't follow our orders!'
Frederious stood still, and so Sarith and Anya did. An anger filled him. Why didn't they user their magic to attack the guards? It wouldn't be that difficult!
'Here it is!' sayd the person protected by the two guards. 'Now, activate it so we can acess the main chamber.'
Frederious heard a strange click and something moving through the ground of that room.
'Don't even try to follow us, as we're kill you immediatly!' sayd one of the guards, before they began to walk, again.
However, Frederious couldn't resist trying to see what was going on, and so looked at the direction of the sound for a short sight.
What he saw really surprised him: great part of the wall had moved to show a tunnel leading to the stairs that were leading downstairs. The strange group had already left the room.
Amazed, he looked at Sarith and Anya, to see what they could be thinking of. They seemd as amazed as him. Then, Sarith decided to break the silence of the room:
'So, are we going to follow them or what?'
The idea seemed strange: how could they follow that strange group if the guards had been so worried of what they could do? However, the wall was still revealing the tunnel...
'Sure!' sayd Frederious.
What?! Did I just sayd that? I really must control myself!
However, they were already walking through the tunnel. Frederious hurried to catch them up.
The stairs leaded to a small room with no light at all. After a lot of time researching the room, they found a door, probably the one used by the other group.
It was shut tight. Then, someone Frederious couldn't recongnise without light casted some spell and opened the door.
'Thanks, ...' Frederious was saying, but he couldn't see who did it.
'You're welcome' sayd Anya, right in front of him. So, it was Anya. 'Let's go!'
'I have a strange feeling we are going to meet him again' sayd Sarith, not far away from him. Frederious thought it was strange the way Sarith talked about the man they saw with the guards. Did she know him?
'You know who was him?' he asked, but soon regreted that question. Although they were in a dark room, it was easy to "sense" their surprise about the question.
'You mean you don't know who was him?' asked Anya, after a great silence of incredibility.


And so it finishes with great suspense!
Saritah, you're the one who will reveal the next details of this fantastic story! Good luck!

3 Comments:

Blogger MF said...

Well, it is good, since you didn't know this story's contents. Anyway, aware to the story: you must read the previous chapters as many times as possible. There were a few mistakes about the storyline.
Don't dishope: this is go. In fact, I can't think of the next thing that'll happen!!! I'm thrilling!!!
Good work.

Monday, 26 June, 2006

 
Blogger R said...

@ fipa: what mistakes? I really read the previous chapters some times before writing this one, and didn't find anything wrong...

@ argaroth: yes, that's the one: The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion :D! (I really hope you've never played it or know about it's story :P)

Anyway, thank you too. Let's hope the next chapter arrives soon (hurry up, Saritah!)

Friday, 30 June, 2006

 
Blogger MF said...

Saritah is busy with German now...
Mistakes like the fact that Anya wasn't in the same room as Frederious and someyhing else I forgot. :P

Friday, 30 June, 2006

 

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