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Monday, January 02, 2006

Fifteen Journey - Chapter 12

“I’m staring at you
Just staring at you,
My radio…”
That was exactly was Kane was doing while listening to a song. His brain had stopped; he did not want to move a muscle. But then, something made him move…
“…of Tourch, the first battle has just finished. Tfff…”
He quickly glanced at his radio and started hearing carefully.
‘Interference…’ Kane thought.
“…an intense battle, we should congratulate-tfff- for his bravery…”
The radio finished its speech and started the music once again.
“But, who won? WHO WON?”
The servant, who was going upstairs, sweared he had seen a thunder. Kane just went outside so that someone could tell him who won against whom.
“Who won? Who won?” Kane was just asking every people that were on his way. They did not seem to care, just doing their shores. However, a group of people were celebrating. Kane approached them.
“Have a glass friend!”
“But-“
“There are no buts pal! Drink!”
Kane drank the cup. There were a few number of people celebrating, so that player was probably not that popular. Then, someone got Kane’s attention.
“I know you!!!”

“What happened?”
“I don’t know Mary, but the first player to appear alive will probably be the champion…”
Mary was scared. What if…? Then, someone saw a silhouette in the middle of the dust.
“Here he comes!”
“Congratulations!”
“Hurray!”
Rick was covered him claps and whistles while carrying Number 3’s body in his back.
However, Rick's party was interrumpted after being dragged to the nurse's office.
“Ouch!”
“Come on, it is almost finished” the nurse replied.
Rick had just a few scratches from his falls during the fight. He thanked his angel for giving him so much luck. He just did not understand how he won-
“Ouch! That hurt!”
“Stay still!”
…how he won against Number 3, or (Rick remembered his name) Michael Twain. He did not even understand what art Michael was using during the fight.
“My head…”
Michael had wakened up.
“Where is Horous? Where is he?”
‘Horous? Who is Horous?’
“WHERE IS HE?”
“Calm down” Rick started “I don’t know who Horous is but you’d better relax. You won’t be able to do anything if you’re in that state.”
Eventually Michael calmed down.
“I’m Rick Flaim. Your name is Michael, right?”
“Yeah, but you can call me Mike if you want…”
Still, Mike did not want to cheer up.
“I’m going out.” Rick replied.
“You can’t go! You’re not full healed!” the nurse exclaimed.
“I don’t mind…”
Mind? He minded...
‘Who the hell is Horous???’
Rick was desesperated. There was no sight of no one in the battle field. Then he heard a bark.
‘Of course!’
He ran into the nurse’s office with something in his arms.
“Horous!” Mike exclaimed “Where have you been?”
“He was still in the battle field.”
“I can’t say how many times I’m thanked. Oh, thank you!”
“That’s ok. I’m glad I could help.” Rick caressed the little dog, named Horous.
That was the beginning of a strong friendship.

Next Chapter:
More info about Mike. Two different ways to choose. Which one is the right?

Author’s Note:
Wow, we are already in chapter 12! Cool! More action is about to come. Stay tunned and comment as always!!!

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3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice... I think the expression is "Who the hell is Horous??".
Expecting a bit more detail but it`s good for now...

Monday, 02 January, 2006

 
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Blogger Fredy said...

The text is good but I think that the spaces between the text make it a bit confusing because we (readers) think that a different thing is going to start.
Keep the good work!

Tuesday, 03 January, 2006

 

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