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Sunday, November 27, 2005

Fifteen Journey - Chapter 1

“You’re coming back, right?”
“It is really important to win this year.”
“We are counting on you…”
That was all that Rick remembered. The hopeful voices that surrounded him instants ago were too comfortable. He was on his way to Levinita, the city where he would receive the instructions. He already knew he was number Seven: each village had already its own number.
The day was perfect: the sun was shinning, the breeze was comfortable and the nature was cheerful.
He started running with excitement; he felt that Levinita was near. And it was more than a strong feeling. He looked to the present landscape: there was Levinita: the capital city; the city of chances. Its beauty did not escape from his eyes, but it was still his enemy. He needed to pass the crowd without being noticed, and that was exactly what happened. Everyone was just too busy with the preparation for the games.
“Excuse me…”, Rick heard behind him. That voice came from a beautiful girl with her sixteen’s very busy.
‘The girls around here must be profited…’, he thought really disappointed with the waste. Although wanting not being noticed, many of the local females still murmured, giggling. But he knew he was safe. Then, he started worrying about his own problems. Looking for a hotel to spend the night wasn’t easy. He found one cheap that respected the minimum of hygienically rules. He felt sleepy and let it win.

Next Chapter:
Why is Rick in Levinita? What are the games? Why doesnt’s he want to be noticed?

Authors Note: Well, here's the first chapter. I don't like it that much, but it is necessary. I promise I'll update as soon as I can!

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3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

i update; you update; we update. let's just Cozido à Portuguesa!!!!!!!!

Sunday, 27 November, 2005

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

LOL????

Sunday, 27 November, 2005

 
Blogger Sara_fc said...

Hey Iniciar!

Very nice story!Keep working hard...I know it's kind of hard to work inside that tinny little cage.However, that's what you do.You work for our blog!

Shall I need to remind you that my office lions and crocodiles are still hungry? And you know what happens if you DON'T work..(muhahaha)

I WANT that 4th chapter first thing in the morning...4 am, right?

Yours Sincerly.
Saritah

PS: JUST KIDDING!
Love you guys! :)

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